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Famed for his masterful use of irony, many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories have become classics due to the author slowly revealing at the end of each piece a tragic twist of fate.
Answer: Option D
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D
The original sentence begins with the modifier "Famed for his masterful use of irony," which requires a person as its subject.However, in the original sentence, "many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories" is the subject. Moreover, the phrase "due to the author slowly revealing" isawkward.
(A)This choice is incorrect as itrepeats the original sentence.
(B) The pronoun "he" must have a person as its antecedent, yet there is no person in the sentence.Remember that "he" cannot refer to "Guy de Maupassant" here, since the name is part of a possessive phrase: "Guy de Maupassant's short stories".The author himself is not grammatically present in the sentence.
(C) The opening modifier "famed for using irony in a masterful way"incorrectly modifies "short stories" instead of Guy de Maupassant himself. It also contains the awkward phrase "because of the author slowly revealing."
(D) CORRECT.This choiceremedies the flawed modifier by rewriting the sentence to avoid it. This choice also replaces the awkward phrase "due to the author's revealing" with "evidenced in the slow revelation."
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D
The original sentence begins with the modifier "Famed for his masterful use of irony," which requires a person as its subject.However, in the original sentence, "many of Guy de Maupassant's short stories" is the subject. Moreover, the phrase "due to the author slowly revealing" isawkward.
(A)This choice is incorrect as itrepeats the original sentence.
(B) The pronoun "he" must have a person as its antecedent, yet there is no person in the sentence.Remember that "he" cannot refer to "Guy de Maupassant" here, since the name is part of a possessive phrase: "Guy de Maupassant's short stories".The author himself is not grammatically present in the sentence.
(C) The opening modifier "famed for using irony in a masterful way"incorrectly modifies "short stories" instead of Guy de Maupassant himself. It also contains the awkward phrase "because of the author slowly revealing."
(D) CORRECT.This choiceremedies the flawed modifier by rewriting the sentence to avoid it. This choice also replaces the awkward phrase "due to the author's revealing" with "evidenced in the slow revelation."
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